2 minute sequence

Draft 1:
Kim, Lizzie, Todd and Richard set off from their night out trick or treating, deciding they were too old for such a practice and needed something more daring in their lives. Deciding to visit Moorecliffe Orphange, a place that has reportedly been haunted since the 1943 Moorecliffe Massacre, they set out to prove that ghosts do not exist. As atheists, they are completely confident that there is no life beyond death, and there will be nothing but an abandoned institute. Richard and Todd are determined to freak the girls out as much as they can, jumping up behind them as much as possible, until something moves behind the wall and Todd is accused, but the laughter of children can be heard... Following the sounds, we do not see where the teens go, but a few seconds later their screams can be heard and the screen blacks out.

Draft 2:
Group of kids talk about orphanage
cuts to Montage of orphanage from past
with voice over (of group)explaining what happened...
title sequence
modern kids
I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO!!!!