Script (Redraft)

Olivia, Luke, Josh and Jade

Luke: What we gonna do tonight guys?
Jade: I dunno, we could throw a halloween party?
Olivia: Yeah but where? There's nowhere that we could throw it..
Jade: Good point.
Josh: How about we go to Moorecliffe?
Jade: Oh yeah, isn't that the orphanage that was abandoned ages ago?
Luke: Some other kids went up there on halloween in the eighties. I can't remember what happened to them but apparently some ghosts scared the crap out of them
Olivia: How so?
Luke: Well, the story is said that in the 1940s, this mad guy escaped from a asylum or something, he was convinced one of the orphans was his kid, and he wanted vengeance on someone for taking her.

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Luke cont.: He went to Moorecliffe and no one knows exactly what happened.

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Jade: It's supposed to be haunted by little children isn't it?
Olivia: My Dad tried scaring me with that story when I was a kid, I thought he was just making the whole thing up.
Luke: No, it's true. Well, to some extent..
Olivia: My Dad always said that the kid wasn't actually his, he just knew her mum and hated her, so wanted revenge through the orphan.
Luke: Something like that, I wish I knew the full story.
Olivia: I've found it on my phone.

"Moorecliffe Massacre: On Halloween, 1943 an escaped prisoner sought revenge on the likes of his ex wife. A child who was a resident at the orphanage was the result of an affair in previous years. The prisoner was sentenced for life due to the murder of his former wife, after finding out "their" child was not actually his after the father revealed himself at a family gathering. After escaping from the prison the man was determined to find the child, after learning the child's location from a recent newspaper article with a photograph of the orphans. He instantly set out to the orphanage and upon arriving, told all staff that he was the father of the child and had returned to take her home. He was let through to see the child, and in seeing the resemblance of his betraying wife, he went insane. No traces of any of the orphans were found. Rumours have it that the spirit of the orphans still roam the halls, scaring away all trespassers, and that the prisoner is still alive, but no one knows where.